Alien Warrior’s Captive Earthling: SciFi Alien Romance by Kat Emm

Alien Warrior's Captive Earthling: SciFi Alien Romance by Kat Emm
Published by CreateSpace Independent Publishing Platform on August 30th 2015
Genres: Science Fiction, Romance
Pages: 204
Format: eBook
ISBN: 978-1517120467
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Zyn is an ice-cold alpha alien. All emotion has been tortured out of him, and now he is a weapon with fangs. Until he meets her. She has his species most desired food … her hot blood. He didn’t think Tellurians still lived, but now he has rescued one. He thought he was ice … and had no feelings. He thought he was only good at one thing … being a lethal warrior. But the Tellurian named Anna, a soft civilian, battles him at every turn. She is as beautiful as she is vexing and outspoken, and she is getting under his icy control.
Anna wants her freedom, but she never imagined an alien with a rocking hot body and icy control would be the one to save her. But if he doesn’t listen to her soon, she’s going to have to take him down … with a kiss, just to show him who is really the boss.

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Alien Warrior’s Captive Earthling by Kat Emm, needs some work; but it does have a fun world building, which she can expand. First the title really? Yikes!  Second the story is unique, I will give the author points for originality. Alien Deadly Shoes! Third the books sentence structure and language usage was written as if English may not have been the authors first language, as there are glaring omissions that English language people use, and other dialects omit. Yes, English is a wordy complex mess of a language.  Fourth the book needs edited because of this as words are omitted and grammar is misused.  When I say edited I don’t mean just proof read, actually edited for content and structure.  Whereas proof reading is just for grammar mistakes and far too many authors rely on spell and grammar check, and don’t actual hirer a qualified proof reader, that actually reads their books.

The book despite the problems is getting two and half stars from me because of the world building and characters that inhabit the world that Emm has created. Emm has left lots of room so that she can flesh out her universe. At the moment it is a feudal one with a rebel faction, rescuing innocents out of slavery. Two and a half stars does not make a bad book, it is a book with problems that can be fixed. The author had built a fun science fiction world, so author Emm, ‘don’t throw the baby out with the bath water’, hirer good people to support your art and I will read more books written by you.

The secondary characters were fun and I see an Axi and Brax book in the authors future.

 

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